Thursday, November 12, 2009

Natures Splendor Colloidal Silver Critique My Poem?

Critique my poem? - natures splendor colloidal silver

Winter Day

The leaves are fallen trees,
The death, which left everything happens
gnarled branches and tangled roots
all that remains for the winter Clock

Snow, slowly from the sky
along the fire in the sky
Covers all, a blue blanket,
a vast sea and bright

Virgin Snow was clean and pure
desecrated by the tracks of humans and animals,
sitting side by side
They walked side by side

A vagabond wind from the mountains
running past trees, shrubs sprints past
and activities on the frozen lakes and rivers
to me, it's
I take a deep breath and take things in
and behold, in awe, the grandeur of nature
the creation of a winter's day

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